Addiction
Addiction
9.11.07
By Moonlitewriter
My heart is beating
My mind if fleeting
not being able to concentrate
ugh, this a horrible debate
My impatience is growing
my need is un-stowing
I have to do it right now
To it, I will bow.
I must do the dead
Who cares of what will breed
I have to do it now
To it I will bow
I’m off to a journey
to turn my life from tipsy turfy
to smooth, bliss
without a diss
My heart, fast + beating
My mind, rushing + fleeting
I have to do it now
To Addiction I will bow.
Authors Note: Well…this isn’t very good at the beginning. But I guess it improves throughout it’s course. I give it a 3/5. And no, I am NOT addicted to drugs.
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June 2nd, 2008 at 11:03 pm
For a beginning poem you could do a lot worse. Not half bad if you ask me.
June 21st, 2008 at 5:23 am
yeah, sounds about right. you spelled “deed” wrong (1st line, 3rd paragraph).
July 11th, 2008 at 3:08 am
Ha. Thanks