Cooler than the Moon
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Authors Note: Well in 6th grade, this was my favorite poem that I wrote. It made sense and was just simply…beautiful IMO. But that was 6th grade. So from the 5/5 in 6th grade, I give it a 3/5 right now.
Black
ack!
What a color?!
Represents darkness between each other
ack!
Black
Authors Note: Oh god…what the hell was I thinking?! This is simply horrible. I don’t know why I gave it a 2/5, but now I give it a 1/5. It’s just…I feel sick after looking at this.
Dark day
not hurray
a gloomy day
with nothing to say
except
it’s a dark day.
Authors Note: Well, this poem was written 4 years ago. I gave it a 3/5 back then, but compared to my poems now, I believe at most, it deserves a 1.7/5. It’s not really…anything. Just some words put together.
Blue
is a color
of dark dark oceans
and a color
of dark dark skies
Blue is a color of darkness
Authors Notes:
I give this poem a 1/5. It’s horrible and just plain disgusting in my opinion. When I first wrote it in 6th grade, I was actually amazed with it. I must have been on pot or something to even think that this was a feasible poem. But nonetheless, I’ve heard 3 good comments about it in my life. So it was mandatory to put it up.